Draw this again Meme

First time ever i do this, okay so the Before was created at 2012 (you can find it here: moonmadmalkav.deviantart.com/a…)
It was a request i did for someone, now i wanted to draw it again (3 years later) I used the same references only for the new one i started with a normal head reference (3d) and drew that and than just filled in the gaps, it was drawn at idk, 12th of august? anyway hope you guys like my improvements